I got a lot out of my drafting process, but after getting reviews from my peers, and after meeting with Professor Tougaw, I realize that I think I need to:
1. Re-organize my essay to fit under the “umbrella” of anarchy in dreams.
2. Write a thesis to reflect this.
3. Relate my sources to my main idea more clearly, cutting out unnecessary tangents
4. Work on Gaipa’s and Harvey’s strategies and principles, especially stitching, and just making things flow more smoothly in general
So, I have a lot of work to do, but I think I know where it all goes now.