Work in Progress

I got a lot out of my drafting process, but after getting reviews from my peers, and after meeting with Professor Tougaw, I realize that I think I need to:

1. Re-organize my essay to fit under the “umbrella” of anarchy in dreams.

2. Write a thesis to reflect this.

3. Relate my sources to my main idea more clearly, cutting out unnecessary tangents

4. Work on Gaipa’s and Harvey’s strategies and principles, especially stitching, and just making things flow more smoothly in general

So, I have a lot of work to do, but I think I know where it all goes now.

 

One thought on “Work in Progress”

  1. You have A LOT done, Chani! Don’t think otherwise. Modifying your thesis so that it falls under the umbrella of anarchy is really interesting. I think it’s going to take some time but just re-read your paper a few times and try practicing the highlighting activity we did a couple weeks back. It’s helpful. Your paper is sounding a lot more intriguing. Good luck!

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