Hi all! I’m writing this post more conversationally, as I miss talking to you guys. So, I learned a lot from the feedback I got from Kelly, James, Zahava, and Professor Tougaw. As I had written more of a detailed outline than a draft, it was a bit difficult to give feedback to me, and I appreciate the advice I recieved.
Based on the advice of my group, I plan on actually going into Freud and other older psychological minds on consciousness. I also plan on making my points connect in a more evident way. Most of all, I need to just get a readable draft out there. I also realize that my jumps from different sections of the conversation will seem disorganized, unless I am very careful to stick to my main idea.
I think that I’m pretty certain of my stance and the stances of my sources, and just have to weave my thesis from there. I am currently working on a running draft, and look forward to workshopping a lot more with you guys after the break!
I feel as if it was way too much fun reading the papers of my classmates. The ideas sucked me in, and I feel a lot better about my (really weird) ideas, after seeing how others are making their (truly awesome) ideas work. I was grateful for this opportunity, and am so glad to have been a part this process and this class!